You have written some lovely similes. Your next step would be to extend them. Instead of saying:My sister’s eyes are dark brown like chocolate.You could extend it like this:My sister’s eyes are dark brown like chocolate icing dipping off my birthday cake.
You have written some lovely similes. Your next step would be to extend them. Instead of saying:
ReplyDeleteMy sister’s eyes are dark brown like chocolate.
You could extend it like this:
My sister’s eyes are dark brown like chocolate icing dipping off my birthday cake.